In your Writing History Response, you clarified how writing has affected you as a person and more fully explained how writing with emotion has shaped you as a writer. In future academic writing, make sure to stay away from second person (you, your) and to focus on adding commas after introductory clauses.
In your Exploratory Essay, you added clarity to some of your examples and added questions to the end. Remember, when you ask a question, it needs to be genuine. If you can answer it, it’s not genuine.
In your Annotated Bibliography, you more fully analyzed your sources. You still need analysis in your annotation of Pedro.
In your Joining the Conversation piece, you fixed your punctuation and your citations. I still wanted to know more from your sources.
Dear Josh,
ReplyDeleteIn your Writing History Response, you clarified how writing has affected you as a person and more fully explained how writing with emotion has shaped you as a writer. In future academic writing, make sure to stay away from second person (you, your) and to focus on adding commas after introductory clauses.
In your Exploratory Essay, you added clarity to some of your examples and added questions to the end. Remember, when you ask a question, it needs to be genuine. If you can answer it, it’s not genuine.
In your Annotated Bibliography, you more fully analyzed your sources. You still need analysis in your annotation of Pedro.
In your Joining the Conversation piece, you fixed your punctuation and your citations. I still wanted to know more from your sources.
Megan